Good job!
Very nice for a first flash. Here's your scoring:
Begin w/ 10/10
-1 for choppy animation at parts
-1 for no sound
-1 for action a bit slow at times
+1 for humour
Which puts you at an 8/10.
Keep up the good work!
Good job!
Very nice for a first flash. Here's your scoring:
Begin w/ 10/10
-1 for choppy animation at parts
-1 for no sound
-1 for action a bit slow at times
+1 for humour
Which puts you at an 8/10.
Keep up the good work!
Nice!
I liked it just as much as I liked the first one! Awesome, great animation style, music, humour, everything! Good job to you!
:)
It made me laugh a bit, but it looked like it was made in a weekend- and the voices seem to have little emotion, which seems to directly contradict your flashes' title!
Still, it was funny. Good job on this one.
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